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Post by Wolf Prince on Sept 26, 2013 21:16:25 GMT -5
This is the first time i wasn't the one corrected o.o Gold/Green... i know that feeling bro ;-;
Also i agree with Levi, sleep is very important, i don't get how people intentionally stay awake for so long O.o
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MangaGold
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Post by MangaGold on Sept 27, 2013 8:22:44 GMT -5
This is the first time i wasn't the one corrected o.o Gold/Green... i know that feeling bro ;-; Also i agree with Levi, sleep is very important, i don't get how people intentionally stay awake for so long O.o *Cough* Pokémon x and y when it comes out. *cough*
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Post by Kizaru on Sept 27, 2013 12:29:40 GMT -5
This is the first time i wasn't the one corrected o.o Gold/Green... i know that feeling bro ;-; Also i agree with Levi, sleep is very important, i don't get how people intentionally stay awake for so long O.o Shows, events, results lol~ I personally stayed up 2 nights before my exam results game, too anxious to sleep xD
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Post by Wolf Prince on Sept 27, 2013 13:37:53 GMT -5
Still, lack of sleep relates to stress and mental problems .-.
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Post by Steelgrassify on Sept 27, 2013 20:00:02 GMT -5
They have done studies on lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a persons mentality and before hand ran the same tests (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults (not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participates 3 days of 8 hour sleep and did the tests. What you would expect really as far as the test results. Now they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point: Get your sleep people
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Post by zerocielX on Sept 27, 2013 20:16:52 GMT -5
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Post by Corporal Levi on Sept 27, 2013 20:42:47 GMT -5
They have done studies on lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a persons mentality and before hand ran the same tests (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults (not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participates 3 days of 8 hour sleep and did the tests. What you would expect really as far as the test results. Now they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point: Get your sleep people They have done studies on a lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a person's mentality and ran the same tests beforehand (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults ( who were not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participants 3 days of 8 hours of sleep and did the tests. This is what you would really expect regarding the test results. Now, they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly, they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point is to get your sleep, people.
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Post by Kizaru on Sept 28, 2013 7:47:50 GMT -5
Still, lack of sleep relates to stress and mental problems .-. Or waiting for something and too excited to sleep. Normally you are too busy playing a game or writing soemthing thenn it's time up and you have to stay awake during the day ~.~ They have done studies on lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a persons mentality and before hand ran the same tests (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults (not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participates 3 days of 8 hour sleep and did the tests. What you would expect really as far as the test results. Now they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point: Get your sleep people They have done studies on a lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a person's mentality and ran the same tests beforehand (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults ( who were not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participants 3 days of 8 hours of sleep and did the tests. This is what you would really expect regarding the test results. Now, they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly, they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point is to get your sleep, people. If people understand the post then you don't need to correct the grammar or sentence structure or the like. Unless it's for your own convenience, in which case you should keep it in your head >.>
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Post by Corporal Levi on Sept 28, 2013 12:07:40 GMT -5
Longest was 48 hour (not drink) *cough cough* "No drink" would be more correct and don't forget the "s" at the end of "hours" I really had to. I'm sorry.
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Post by Steelgrassify on Sept 29, 2013 15:10:44 GMT -5
They have done studies on lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a persons mentality and before hand ran the same tests (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults (not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participates 3 days of 8 hour sleep and did the tests. What you would expect really as far as the test results. Now they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point: Get your sleep people They have done studies on a lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a person's mentality and ran the same tests beforehand (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults ( who were not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participants 3 days of 8 hours of sleep and did the tests. This is what you would really expect regarding the test results. Now, they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly, they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point is to get your sleep, people. Just to clarify, if you are adding punctuation you just need to bold the added mark, not the whole word. (Same goes for a plurality of words) The "a" in the first sentence isn't necessary, and is viable either way. This is what you would really expect regarding the test results. Your correction would make more sense if I actually went into detail of what the results were. If you read the sentence before that and your correction you will see what I mean.
And really, the ending could have gone either way. The way I said it is acceptable since I combine "the point" with "get your sleep people" I do agree however that there should be a comma after sleep and I should have probably not made "Get" capitalized.
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Post by MangaGold on Sept 29, 2013 15:34:07 GMT -5
When did this become a grammar correction thread?
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Post by zerocielX on Sept 29, 2013 15:45:24 GMT -5
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Post by Corporal Levi on Sept 29, 2013 16:05:04 GMT -5
They have done studies on a lack of sleep and it's kind of interesting. They wondered how sleep affected a person's mentality and ran the same tests beforehand (listed below) on people who were drunk. Then they got together adults ( who were not drunk) that got 8 hours of sleep or more and put them through testing. The testing would include written tests and a driving test. The first time they gave the participants 3 days of 8 hours of sleep and did the tests. This is what you would really expect regarding the test results. Now, they took the same group of people and had them stay up for 48 hours and then take the tests again. Surprisingly, they did worse on the test than the drunk people. The point is to get your sleep, people. Just to clarify, if you are adding punctuation you just need to bold the added mark, not the whole word. (Same goes for a plurality of words) The "a" in the first sentence isn't necessary, and is viable either way. This is what you would really expect regarding the test results. Your correction would make more sense if I actually went into detail of what the results were. If you read the sentence before that and your correction you will see what I mean.
And really, the ending could have gone either way. The way I said it is acceptable since I combine "the point" with "get your sleep people" I do agree however that there should be a comma after sleep and I should have probably not made "Get" capitalized.
Perhaps correcting the first sentence was unnecessary. However, as it stands, "What you would expect really as far as the test results" is not a complete sentence because the subject (in this case "what you would expect really") does not have a predicate. When did this become a grammar correction thread? Longest was 48 hour (not drink)
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Post by MangaGold on Sept 29, 2013 16:09:26 GMT -5
Just to clarify, if you are adding punctuation you just need to bold the added mark, not the whole word. (Same goes for a plurality of words) The "a" in the first sentence isn't necessary, and is viable either way. This is what you would really expect regarding the test results. Your correction would make more sense if I actually went into detail of what the results were. If you read the sentence before that and your correction you will see what I mean.
And really, the ending could have gone either way. The way I said it is acceptable since I combine "the point" with "get your sleep people" I do agree however that there should be a comma after sleep and I should have probably not made "Get" capitalized.
Perhaps correcting the first sentence was unnecessary. However, as it stands, "What you would expect really as far as the test results" is not a complete sentence because the subject (in this case "what you would expect really") does not have a predicate. When did this become a grammar correction thread? Longest was 48 hour (not drink) Dang it, well you don't have to correct me on it.
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Post by Steelgrassify on Sept 29, 2013 16:17:30 GMT -5
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